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Rosalia-Chan
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PostSubject: Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote!   Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote! I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 03, 2012 11:54 am

It's pretty depressing though. http://ultimavita.deviantart.com/gallery/39280740


Do you remember?
How I was a shy little girl, you saw past it.

Do you remember?
How you became a sister to me, our bond so strong.

Do you remember?
How you loved the scent of tulips, in the fields they grew.

Do you remember?
How the love of your life proposed, your smile so bright.

Do you remember?
How happy you were to about to bring life in the world, a soul so pure.

But you can't remember...
All the things I've learned from you.

You can't remember...
All the admiration I hold for you.

You can't remember...
All the laughers and smiles I'll make at graduation.

For on that tragic August night,
Fate saw it to take you away to the clouds.
And even though my future memories will be made without you by my side...

I'll always remember.

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Based off a true story I wished never happened.


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PostSubject: Re: Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote!   Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote! I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 03, 2012 12:06 pm

Oh god that's beautiful...
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PostSubject: Re: Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote!   Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote! I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 03, 2012 12:13 pm

Weird how I can only write well when I'm writing about something that broke my heart. Otherwise, I write like crap. The paper version of it is with my friend's parents. No reason for me to keep it since I'm at University away from home, and it gives them comfort knowing that their daughter had someone hold on to her memory.
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PostSubject: Re: Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote!   Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote! I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 03, 2012 12:15 pm

Rosalia wrote:
Weird how I can only write well when I'm writing about something that broke my heart. Otherwise, I write like crap. The paper version of it is with my friend's parents. No reason for me to keep it since I'm at University away from home, and it gives them comfort knowing that their daughter had someone hold on to her memory.
I'm not good with poetry although i've never really tried..i might try sometime
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PostSubject: Re: Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote!   Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote! I_icon_minitimeMon Oct 22, 2012 3:55 pm

What I said to my friend about this after he read it:
i cry evrytim
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PostSubject: Re: Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote!   Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote! I_icon_minitimeMon Oct 22, 2012 6:27 pm

Katy wrote:
What I said to my friend about this after he read it:
i cry evrytim
Should I be sorry? :c Didn't mean to do that, lol? :S
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PostSubject: Re: Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote!   Behold the only (good) poem I ever wrote! I_icon_minitimeMon Oct 22, 2012 7:58 pm

Rosalia wrote:
Katy wrote:
What I said to my friend about this after he read it:
i cry evrytim
Should I be sorry? :c Didn't mean to do that, lol? :S
It's an internet saying xD
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